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Post  WARRIOR on Mon 09 Aug 2010, 11:53 am

I bare to You

The windows of my soul

Naked are my emotions

For your gaze

My humanity cries out



You are nectar to me

Golden Life so sweet

Purity that is unknown

My life is a kaleidoscope

Overview and replay



You have ease my load

Erase the film off me

We dwell in unity

Humbly, grace, mercy

Love of splendor

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well done

Post  fennywest on Fri 13 Aug 2010, 11:15 am

well-written, full of imagery, short and sweet

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