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He Came To Give Us Life

Post  Fenny West on Mon 10 Sep 2007, 5:48 pm





He came to give us life-
His Life- the God-Kind of Life
He came to give us peace-
His peace for our struggles to cease
He came to build a bridge
For us to cross to the Fatherís lodge
So Come out of the prison,
What are you waiting for?
He has paid the price
And opened the door
Walk in the newness of life
Live the abundant life
Leave the old things behind
Seek Him, new things find
Our debt is paid to set us free.
The blood was shed to make you free
He paid the price for you to have the prize.
Therefore, my friend, itís time to rise.




John10:10, Rom.6:4


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Post  WordofLife on Tue 11 Sep 2007, 3:45 pm

AMEN to this note "It is time to rise". Great! Simply great. I think I will come more than twice a week to read your poems and I am impressed.

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Post  palmtree on Tue 11 Sep 2007, 4:03 pm

Dear Fenny I am not into poetry because I have never been able to understand it. I read two poems of yours and they made lot of sense to me for the first time. Hats off to you! You have made me like and understand poetry. God bless you with more skills and understanding.

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Post  Fenny West on Tue 11 Sep 2007, 8:44 pm

Hi Word of Life,

It is great to hear about your interest in poetry.

I shall be giving some tips on how to write poem in the near future.

Thanks for your time and interest.


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Post  Fenny West on Tue 11 Sep 2007, 8:50 pm

Hi Palmtree

I am delighted to know that you enjoyed the poem. Poetic skill can be learned. I am glad that you understood the poems straight away.

I don't like to make poems complex and requiring mental acrobatics. I thing it is better served plan and simple; like reading the word of God in poetic rendering.


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