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Post  Irv Everett Tue 18 Nov 2008, 6:48 pm

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How can you say, you love me; when your heart gives you away?

How can you say, you love me; when from My path you’ve strayed?

How can you say, you love me; when My name you’ve denied?

How can you say, you love me; when from My word you hide?



How can you say, you love me; when you make this Proverb true?

When as a dog returns to his vomit; when as folly to the fool

When as a washed pig; you’ve returned back to the mire

How can you say, you love me; when I’m no longer your desire?



How can you say, you love me; when your talents you refuse?

How can you say, you love me; when My temple you abuse?

When you no longer seek me; when you’ve silenced your prayers

How can you say, you love me; with no testimony to share?



How can you say, you love me; when from Me you’ve turned aside?

How can you say, you love me: when your filled with so much pride?

When life is all about you; from beginning until the end

How can you say, you love me; forgive me Father, I have sinned!


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Post  Waqar Daniel Tue 18 Nov 2008, 7:43 pm

Really, I was thinking the same when someone asked me that she has been seeking God but she cannot find Him and the same questions arose in mind that God must be saying the same. Beautiful diction and I have really enjoyed your poem. The instructions in your poems always remind me of this Proverb;

As iron sharpens iron,
so one man sharpens
another (Proverbs 21:17)

God bless you and your family
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Post  Irv Everett Wed 19 Nov 2008, 3:22 am

Thank you Daniel, but you are the light in this darkness directing souls to Christ, blessing Irv
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Post  FaithfulSon Wed 19 Nov 2008, 6:11 am

You have beautifully touched our transgressions but how wonderful is our God that if we ask Him to forgive us He does that. Thank you Irv for such a wonderful poem.

God bless you
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Post  annlovesjesus Wed 19 Nov 2008, 6:16 am

We all say that we love God, with all soul and strength. Most of us deal with hypocrisy and we only worship God with our lips and then get on with our worldly lives.

Do not bring ANYTHING with a DEFECT, because it will not be ACCEPTED on your behalf. (Leviticus 22:20)

Thank you for such a faith inspiring poem.

Blessings in Jesus
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Post  LivingWaters Wed 19 Nov 2008, 6:33 am

"I am the Lord; that is my name! I will not give my glory to another or my praise to idols." (Isa 42:8)

Irv, I will be honest with you here, I also make tall claims regarding my love to God but somehow, many things come before God in my life and I am feel so weak. I remember one verse from the Bible;

God bless you for reminding our weaknesses.
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Post  Irv Everett Fri 21 Nov 2008, 1:00 am

Thank you LivingWaters,annlovesjesus,and FaithfulSon for your comments, may God bless each of you beyond measure and give to you the desires of your hearts, blessings Irv.
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Post  Fenny West Fri 21 Nov 2008, 5:27 am

This is powerful, beautiful,hard-hitting,challenging and true.

Thank you very much for your faifulness and obedience to share this truth in poetry.
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Post  Irv Everett Fri 21 Nov 2008, 7:16 pm

Thank you Fenny for your comments; but to God alone be the glory, for I am nothing but his servant, blessing to you and your family, Irv
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Post  Common Sat 26 Sep 2009, 4:27 pm

I love this poem! Great job Irv!
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Post  blessed Sun 27 Sep 2009, 5:36 pm

I never came across this one but I agree this is one of the best. Many blessings in Jesus
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